I have been away on vacation the past couple of weeks so I
haven't been able to post anything on my blog.
However, not long ago a friend sent me a great column about a professor at my alma mater: the William Allen White School of Journalism at the
University of Kansas.
His name: John Bremner, a native of Australia and ordained Catholic priest who left the priesthood to become a journalist. ("Proof that purgatory really exists," he once told me.)
While I never had the late Professor Bremner (he died in 1987) for a class, he
made his presence known in the newsroom of the University Daily Kansan where I
was the editor-in-chief. He often would stick his head in the door of my office
and say something like: "Good paper today, Ron."
Those were the days I liked. But all too often I heard
things like:
"The lead story on page one makes about as much sense
as a wallaby giving a sermon," which was Prof. Bremner's way of saying it
made no sense at all!
Here is the column published in July by Steve Wilson, Executive
Editor, of The Paducah (KY) Sun. I hope you will enjoy it, but most of all, be
prepared to learn something about words and writing.
An uncommon love of words
By Steve Wilson
Executive Editor, The Paducah Sun
Published Sunday, July 6
On a local TV newscast a few days ago,
the sports anchor said St. Louis Cardinals' catcher Yadier Molina had received
"the lion's share of votes" and would be a starter in this summer's
all-star game.
His use of
"lion's share" seemed dubious and sent me back to a favorite book
called Words on Words. It's written by the late John Bremner, an exuberant
college professor who was obsessed with the proper use of the English language.
As expected, he had an entry for
"lion's share" that didn't square with the usage on TV.
 |
| Professor John Bremner |
"If you use this cliche, know its
proper meaning. In one version of the fable, Aesop's lion got all the meat
except a few scraps snatched by the fox. In the other versions, the lion got it
all. Properly, the lion's share means all or almost all of something, not
merely a majority."
Bremner was a charismatic figure -
6-foot-5, 260-pounds, white bearded, a native Australian who spent the biggest
part of his career teaching journalism at the University of Kansas. He also put
on seminars for newspaper editors around the country, which is how we met and
became friends.
He was an animated instructor, pacing
the room, digressing to tell a story about British history one moment, then
raging about the confusion caused by a misplaced comma the next. More than once
he had thrown open a window in his classroom, waved his white handkerchief and
shouted, "Help, I'm being held
captive by a roomful of idiots."
Such theatrics, he said, were less
about ego than connecting with the audience.
"You don't hold students and
professionals by simply filling them with facts and snippets of knowledge. You
have to keep them interested, keep them alert."
He enjoyed pointing out the illogic of
many word usages.
"You want the word couple to be
singular?" he asked. "All right, the couple was married yesterday. It
went to Florida on its honeymoon. OK so far. But it had an argument. So it
decided to get a divorce. And it went its separate ways."
His book is a pleasure to peruse:
Advance planning - Have you planned
backward lately?
At the present time - Now.
At this point in time - Now.
Better part of - "She stayed for
the better part of an hour" means she stayed for more than a half-hour.
Why better? Are the first 30 minutes better than the last 30? Make it
"most of the hour."
Chair - Keep it a noun. What's wrong
with "Smith presided at the meeting" or "Smith was the
chairman"? Pretty soon we'll be saying Smith "podiumed the
orchestra" or "pulpited the church." Some fingers need to be
kept in the verbal dikes.
Facilitate - A windy word for
"make easier, aid, assist, help."
Goes without saying - So why say it?
Irregardless - Regardless of the school
of "a word is a word if people utilize it," there is no such word as
irregardless.
Precipitate/Precipitous - Though both
adjectives derive from the same root (Latin praeceps, headlong), precipitate
means excessively hasty and refers to actions, whereas precipitous means
extremely steep and refers to physical objects. The bishop who counseled
against "precipitous marriage" either was ignorant of the distinction
or was jumping to the conclusion that rash decisions lead to rocky adventure.
Split infinitive - Splitting an
infinitive means inserting one or more words between the to and the verb, as in
"to thoroughly appreciate." Banning the split infinitive is
ridiculous. The so-called rule has no foundation in logic, rhetoric or common
sense. Go ahead and split. Let euphony be your guide. Never to split is to
seriously stifle.
Toward/Towards - Most authorities
consider toward American and towards British. But a case can be made for
towards in American usage when the following word begins with a vowel sound.
There is sibilant smoothness in "towards evening."
Ugly scar - Don't say, "He has an
ugly scar on his face." Drop ugly. Ugliness is in the eye of the beholder.
Don't force the reader to subscribe to your sensitivities.
For all his wit and wisdom about
editing, one of the most memorable moments of our seminar came at the end when
Bremner said he wanted to share a poem by John Ciardi.
He first explained that a widgeon is a
duck, a wicopy is a tree and widgeons do not roost in trees. When the editors
gave him quizzical looks, he smiled and proceeded to recite the lines from
memory:
A widgeon in a wicopy
In which no widgeon ought to be,
A widowed widgeon was.
While in a willow wickiup
A Wichita sat down to sup
With other Wichitas,
And what they whittled as they ate
Included what had been of late
A widgeon's wing.
'Twas thus
The widgeon in the wicopy,
In which no widgeon ought to be,
A widowed widgeon was.
When he finished, he told the group in
a soft-spoken voice, "If you don't like that, get out of this
business."
Bremner devoted his life to the best
use of words. A tender, alliterative arrangement could make his day.
No comments:
Post a Comment